I’m very late contributing to this month’s picture prompt. I did start the prompt a few weeks ago but…..you know yourself. Life!
Write a story, a poem, a limerick inspired by the last picture on your camera roll, and join us here at Strange Bloggers Picture Prompt 2.
Come and share your own story with us once you checked your camera roll.
The last picture in my camera roll was of this old style dresser taken in the Kerry Bog Village Museum, which we toured while visiting my uncle in Glenbeigh. Since I started writing my fictional novel I’ve become more interested than ever in Irish history. The Bog Village Museum gives an insight into the lives of people in the 18th Century, and this beautiful red dresser stood out for me because a similar one features in my story (insignificantly)…even though my story begins in 1956.
So I decided to share an excerpt of my story. Please let me know what you think! Thank you. 😉
Flossie looked the place up and down. A wave of childhood memories consumed her; the smell of baking and oranges filling her senses. Mrs Connolly always had a bowl of oranges on the table, believing that they encouraged conversation and happiness. It was a different house now. The net curtains were the same except they were grey and frayed, not snow white and pristine as they once were. The red paint peeled in patches on the dresser that was once filled with odd pieces of vibrant coloured pottery.
Flossie sipped at her tea, but she couldn’t face a sandwich. She took a Marietta instead. It would keep her hands busy. Everyone was talking about the deceased. The sombre atmosphere was fraught with speculation and disbelief. The wide-eyed busybodies were hungry for the latest gossip, whispering and watching, listening to everything that was being said. Some only there for the drink, others there out of genuine neighbourly concern.
John nudged Flossie with his elbow. ‘We should go on in.’
All the chairs in the mourning room were occupied, mostly with strangers—relations probably—and a few men whom she knew worked in Corries. Those men he worked with; Flossie wondered did they know what went on in this house. Did he ever tell any of them? Even one of them? No, of course he didn’t. That would’ve been a great laugh for them. She knew how they carried on, how they teased and ribbed each other. They were the last people Frank would tell about the mental torture he had to endure in his own home. The same house that was his home since the day he was born. His happy childhood home!
A gentle breeze from an open window flickered the tiny flames on the candles that surrounded the closed coffin. The smell of incense brought Flossie back to her father’s funeral, and she remembered gazing at him, laid out in his best suit, coins sitting on his closed eyelids, and Auntie Bridgey pulling her away. She thought it was the strangest thing; the coins.
She will touch the coffin and she will say a prayer. She was glad it was closed because she can pretend it’s merely an empty box. A big brown wooden box with nothing in it.
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Here’s Blogger’s Picture Prompt #4
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Hi Gloria, thank you so very much for your participation in the second picture prompt. Read and just love it. If this is part of your fictional novel, I would love to read it once done. I have RT this for you. Remember our next prompt will be out on the 15th of this month. Thanks again
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Thank you very much Esme. Yes, this is a part of it. So many hours I’ve slaved over this but thankfully I’m close to a polished manuscript. Well, as polished as I can manage!
Looking forward to prompt number 3.
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See you then on the 15th for Prompt 3 Thank you for participating.
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Okay I now have so many questions and need to know more. Thank you. Enjoyed. I love the red dresser.
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So glad it left you thinking that way! 😃
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This is great. I must know more! Thanks for sharing this with us!
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Thanks Niki. 🙂
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Looking forward to hearing more from your story Gloria
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Hopefully it will be out there soon!
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