The day that I get to write a blog post about my published novel ‘Secrets in the Babby House’, has finally arrived.
In 2016 I took pen to paper and started putting together ideas I had for a book. Little notes here and there developed into pages and pages of babble and unrealistic scenarios.
Eventually, things started to take shape and I wrote my first draft during NanoWriMo that same year. Very little from that draft ended up in the completed book.
Six years sounds like a long time to write a novel, but I had to learn how to do it properly. I had to learn how to turn my story into a readable novel. I did online courses, listened to YouTube videos, podcasts, read (a lot) about writing. I read various genres in fiction; traditionally published and indie published. I began reading as a writer. I analysed every scene and every character.
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I often had to walk away from it for weeks at a time. Once or twice I wanted to give up on it, but I’m too stubborn to do that, and my family and close friends encouraged me not to. But I also loved it too much to just shelve it.
I loved my characters (even Alice). And I had to continue to nurture them, develop them, listen to them, and allow them to be who they really wanted to be. They didn’t feel like fictional characters to me. I created them and I felt responsible for them. I had to follow it through. I miss them now. Sounds mad, yes!
I’ve been practically living in the past for the last few years; researching days of old, life in the 1950’s/60’s, repressed sexuality, religious disagreements, politics, crime, social expectations.
My story could’ve been set in any town in Ireland, real or fictional, but I choose to set it in my own hometown of Bailieborough in Co Cavan because I have fond childhood memories of the place. Playing in the woods, at the lake, on the back lane, the busyness of the town on a Thursday, Friday and Saturday. The town has changed a lot since then.
On the night of my book launch, I was reminded of how people love to come together to support their own. This is especially true in a small town like Bailieborough. One thing that the town has definitely not lost is its sense of community!
Of course, my book is not going to be everyone’s cup of tea – no book is – but I’ve had a lot of positive feedback so far. Enough to make me feel like the hard work and perseverance has paid off!
‘Secrets in the Babby House’ is available on Barnes and Noble, Amazon.co.uk, Amazon.com, buythebook.ie.
Flossie Lynch is heartbroken when her only love, Frank Connolly, marries another. So when John O’Malley—the well-off catch of the parish—proposes to her, she resigns herself to a marriage of convenience, hoping to learn to love him.
For John, Flossie is mostly a respectable wife and caring mother to their son—and the perfect façade for his dark secret. But bloody Frank Connolly and his blackmailing wife are making things difficult for him.
Another victim of his jealous wife’s abusive behaviour, Frank stays in his loveless marriage for the sake of his two wee girls. He turns his childhood fort into a babby house to give them a refuge from their cruel mother. But for Frank, there is no refuge.
When Flossie rekindles her friendship with Frank, she tries desperately to save him from a life of misery and promises to always look out for his daughters. As the two star-crossed lovers near a second chance, tragedy strikes, forcing Flossie to make good on her promise—while attempting to protect her husband and son.
But as long as there’s a Connolly with a score to settle, there is no escape from the past and no promises for the future.
Set in a gossipy small town in Ireland at a time when marriage is for keeps and sexuality is repressed, Secrets in the Babby House is a family saga over three decades that starts in 1956. It is a story of love, deception, and stolen diaries filled with sins and secrets.
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Well done, Gloria. I applaud you for taking 6 years to write your book. It takes time to create a readable story, especially your first one. It is now on my Kindle.
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Thank you very much, Darlene. I’m so glad I stuck with it! Hanging out with inspirational writers like you has certainly driven me on. X
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Congratulations on completing and publishing your novel after so much time and effort! I hope it does really well for you 😊
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Thanks a million, Clive.
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This sounds like a wonderful book to read. I hope you are proud of yourself! This is quite an accomplishment.
I hope you nothing but success. If you’d like me to review your book on my blog holler.
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Thank you very much, Crystal. I’ll take you up on that, sure! 🙂
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Just shoot me an email of the book and details you want covered. 🙂
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Your story looks intriguing. Congratulations and wishes for much success!
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Thanks very much, Judy. 🤗
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I downloaded the sample, read it and went back for the full book. Excellent so far. It was worth the time you took.
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Thanks Judy. Hope the full story doesn’t disappoint. 🙂
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that journey will resonate with many, but the hard work now starts as everyone expects a sequel…!! Well done and don’t stop now!!
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Thanks Geoff. I’ve been told that the hardest book you’ll ever write is your second one. Gulp!
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Congratulations! This is so exciting. It sounds intriguing.
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Thank you. 🙂
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From the minute I picked it up this book was all consuming. It was heartwarming, heartbreaking, hopeful, funny, happy, sad, edgy, suspenseful satisfying and mysterious…….
Gloria your characters are alive and you lead us in beautifully and you can’t help but become invested in them. It’s so good . It is beautifully written. Even Ned couldn’t put it down.
Congratulations Gloria on an amazing first novel, it was well worth the wait 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽. You can be really proud of yourself. You’re on a role now , you know what to do and how to do it 😃 , looking forward to the sequel….
Who knows Hollywood could be filming in Bailieborough in the not too distant future 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 xxx
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Thanks you very much, Bridie. I’m delighted it did all that for you and Ned.
Book two is in the making as we speak. I’ll try not to take as long writing it. 😅 Xx
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This sounds really good!
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Thank you 🙂 I’m getting very positive feedback in it.
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Congratulation on your publication.
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Thank you Paula.
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Congratulations Gloria!
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Thank you very much! 😀
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Gloria, your six years of study and research paid off. I couldn’t put your book down until I had finished it. You did a fabulous job creating your characters and letting them lead us through the plot.
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Aw, thank you so much, Marsha. It’s lovely to hear such positive feedback.
It keeps me going! 😀
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I’m glad. It does take a long time especially to write a first novel.
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