Charli’s 99 word flash fiction prompt this week is to include stilettos, who will wear them and why. I contemplated telling the story about the night I nearly broke my neck in a pair, but it’s too embarrassing. Some other time maybe! Here’s a wee love story instead.
Cupid
My sister Ann insisted a night out would stop me lamenting over my recent break-up with my boyfriend Joe.
‘Wear your red suede stilettos.’
‘Are they not a bit fancy?’
‘Not for where we’re going,’ she smiled.
I followed Ann to our table in the restaurant—that was already occupied by someone else.
‘What are you doing here?’ I blurted.
‘Meeting my sister,’ he replied.
‘Eh…no you’re not,’ said Ann. She scarpered. I sat opposite him.
‘You’re wearing my favourite shirt.’
‘And you’re wearing those shoes.’ He grinned and I blushed.
‘I’m sorry Joe.’
‘So am I.’

Image by Paweł Ludziński from Pixabay
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A good one!!
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Thank you Darlene.
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That’s Class Gloria, you’re getting very good at these short fiction stories 👍🏽😁
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Thanks Esmeralda. Sure I’ll keep at it! 😃
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That’s a clever sister. Nicely told tale.
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That was a sweet set up, Gloria!
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She clicked her heels and magic haooened. Good job. X
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The good ole heels! 😃
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😊
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